Date: July 31, 2008
Name: Bernadeth
Website: http://lofty-dreams.net/
Site name: Lofty Dreams
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First impression 5/10
Your layout is pretty simple, the color and the appearance didn’t really give me the “Wow” effect that I am usually trying to find in a site. However, I believe you got the skills to improve and so I’m giving you an average grade.
Wow! Thank a lot! I promise to improve skills in coding and so on. But maybe I’m just a newbie that’s why I didn’t get the “WOW” effect, and I appreciate your grade for this.
Blog 6/10
I really like your blog posts. Its really well-organized. But some of your blog posts are a little bit boring. But anyway. Try exaggerating a little, not too much though.
Haha. Thanks for being honest, I’m a bit boring person when I talk — that’s why.
Layout 5/10
Well, like I said earlier, your layout is quite simple. I really like the color pink but I don’t really like it when its being placed together with color white. I think it got to do with the color pink being too light. And you could have placed a background behind the layout, the white space on the left and right. (as seen in the screenshot)
Yeah, I think that way too. But I just modified the layout so I don’t know that it’s too light.
Pages 10/10
You got a broken link.
http://lofty-dreams.net/add-brushes
I already fixed it, thanks for letting me know!
Content 6/10
I’ll start with Navi by navi.
GIRL. I love the way you organized and introduced yourself as a webmistress. Are you a very OC person?
DOMAIN. A little tip, do no write your last name on the WWW. Life is very dangerous right now, both online and offline. So I suggest you remove your last name unless you want to be stalked or hunted down by a freak-o.
VISITOR. You got a lot of contents! *Clap hands*
GUESTBOOK. I find it a little weird that you have an separate layout for your guestbook.
Woww! Thanks, what’s an OC? Sorry, but I don’t know that. I already erased my surname, thanks for the advice! The Guestbook is always been like that, even on other sites.
Popularity 8/10
Woah. You got 32 comment on your last post.
Yeah! and I’m really grateful for the comments you guys gave me.
Cleanliness 10/10
Well-organized like I said for the 9nth time. A perfect score for you!
Thanks, I keep it that way.
Total: 50/70
50 divided by 7 = 7
Overall Rating: 7/10


